Build it up. Work on character art and deepen each character's profiles, then you should have some really good interactions between them which would be great fuel for various animations. In short, the idea has potential, and the animation is slick enough to bring it to fruition in a very visually appealing way. Good luck.
I love the style. I don't know quite how to classify it, and I'm not sure if that's the illustrations clouding my judgement. It was very entertaining!
I look forward to the possibility of a sequel ;)
Unfortunately Josh is asking for his own studio in the Carribbean, so the negotiations have reached a deadlock at the moment. Nonetheless, thank you for your shameless appraisal. What's that? A crisp tenner? Well I certainly didn't drop it... I don't know how it got there, really...
Keep it up Rudy. Despite your movies getting deleted, don't let that stop you. Go for gold :)
You really need to work on the animation to make it smoother, and work on the entire image of the movie. White backgrounds back it very rough and unprofessional.
ow... you can see my other works...
and I've seen your ONE...
I don't really think I shoul listen to YOUR critics...
On the right track...
You have the right idea, but you have to consider what kind of quality a stand alone flash should have. First, the tutorial was only 1 tutorial that anyone could figure out on their own. Second, the programming was under-par. The gravity was decent, though is should still have been powered down, and the character movement was really rough. Fix these bugs and expand the tutorial to maybe simulating more than just underwater environments (space, desert, inside a building, etc). Maybe have a simulating locations tutorial. It'll be very basic stuff that anyone could figure out on their own but it'd still be a better step in the right direction.
Why the hell is April still in her wedding gown!? I love it!
No advertising though.
But oh, soooooo, awesome! I don't care what anyone says. The art was crap but the animation was slick and the flash was entertaining. Awesome job. Way the go against the grain!
Thank you. It's good to know people appreciate this stuff. :D
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I know you...
You're the guy at parties who was just pity invited. You stand in the corner doing absolutely nothing because you're too busy thinking about what to do next on your computer you miss out on socializing. Those kids are just having fun. You don't know their GPAs, you don't know how hard they work to get their grades. Those who work hard party harder, because we deserve it. And those who party too hard get left behind. So stop complaining and learn to live your life. And stop being afraid of girls, they're no different than guys.
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