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Nice...

I like everything about this trailor except for the stick figures. You kind of saved yourself with the really smooth animation, but none the less it's still stick figures. Just, try using real graphix. It takes longer, yet the end result is WAY better.

Many a bug

When you put the sprites together, try to line them up. Also, when you make a sprite animation, be sure you have all the sprites, so that the sprite doesn't dissapear every 2 steps. And also, try using static text rather than input text boxes, it's better that way. And finally, try using butttons to drive the dialogue rather than your own timing. Other than the above mention points try using a frame rate of 24+ and if you are running at 24+ then try smoothing out and speeding up some of the animations. One of them is when Chrono jumps down the stairs, he jumps too slow, speed it up. I hope this helps. At least it's sprites and not stick figures.

Mystic-Skye responds:

thanks doe

LOL...

that was funny man. Stupid rabit rabit... Nice job though. The only problem i had with this flash were the voice overs. The mouth just didn't move right. But that's WAY too little to affect your score, but i thought i should through that out there just incase. Nice artwork too man, skillz. Can't wait to see what happens next with Bebop.

This is what i like to call...

a bad sequel. Man, you ruined the series with this. Banana Phone 1 was the best. What happened? Was this like some sort of prank or something? You let me down. :(

FISHY TALK TO ME!!!

Damn, that was funny. I called the number though for the ear phones... I guess it was busy... no one picked up :\. Oh well, enough spoilers. Damn bro, too funny man. I like your humor. Keep at that flash!

Decent first try man!!!

Best n00b movie in a long time. I do have one piece of advice though, try to keep your animations more consistent. It was good with most of it but there were parts where the guy justed smushed into one moving blob. Of course that's when he was further from the camera but still, it takes away from the whole effect. I like it tho. nice job. Nice solid 3.

That girl...

had a purty mouth... lol. hey i liked your art work, and you had fairly smooth animation. I hope you plan to make a good serious out of this. i will give you a piece of advice, don't borrow TOO much from Tron, cuz that whole cyberspace thing is kewl, but only when it's orginal. Looks promising!

Liked it...

One thing i noticed, one of the characters copies off of Quagmire from Family guy. I caught that, didn't think anyone would ey. But i like the animation. I also like where you're planning on taking the story. The whole superhero aspect is good. Perhaps the first episode can be that evil villians who hate Grunge are threatening the crews favorite fast food store: Checkers. And they have to stop the evil plot. Superhero stories are good to have cause you can go crazy with them. you have basically an unlimited amount of possiblities, you just have to think of them. Good luck with this though, i expect good things. I like the artwork and animation btw, it was good.

Nice...

I liked the cloud effects, you had very smooth animations, but what stoped me from voting higher was a few things:
1) The stick figures, i know it's the stick Saga but i'm still put off by stick figures, Xiao Xiao is all the stick figure animation we need.
2) The dialogue. It flashed by a bit too quick and it had some spelling errors, but thats minor.
3) The length. I felt it was too short. Right when you started to get the feel for the movie it ends. Maybe instead of dividing the movie into diffent parts, try appending them all together. It takes longer but you get better reviews.

All in all i found it to be a good movie. Try working on your artwork though, and when i say this i mean, try getting recognizable figures rather than stix.

...*sniff*... that was beautiful...

I'm still in awe at the level of quality that this movie has. It's quite a BIG relief from all the crappy ass submitions these n00bs now a days think are funny. Thank you for saving me from insanity. B/c of this movie i can perhaps with stand another week or so of n00b 30 sec movies. You definetly deserve a 10 and a 5.

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