Cool. Good example of what was to be done. The character is developed yet relatable; the story was expertly crafted, yet accessible. His conflict was well done but I still feel that he hasn't quite changed. He isn't static, but a dynamism was lacking. The atmosphere is pretty good too: heavy and anxious. I look forward to the next one.
DeftAndEvil
Cool. Good example of what was to be done. The character is developed yet relatable; the story was expertly crafted, yet accessible. His conflict was well done but I still feel that he hasn't quite changed. He isn't static, but a dynamism was lacking. The atmosphere is pretty good too: heavy and anxious. I look forward to the next one.